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Keeneye47

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So for those who are interested or wondering, it's been a good few months since I last updated it. Long story short, I've just been busy with a lot of things and been on a horrible writers block. But I am getting back into it and I'm feeling myself regaining that drive to continue the story. So I do want to apologize for how long I've made those who ARE reading it wait, but I am working on the next few chapters. So no worries, the story of Fragment Memories isn't over, just needed to refuel the creative juices!

Also for those who haven't read it yet, check it out here!
Fallout: Equestria - The SlaverWelcome to the journal post that will be the main page for my Fallout: Equestria story. Just click the chapter you wish to read. Hope you enjoy and please give me feedback on ways I can improve and your thoughts on the story. (Just don't spoil for others and be constructive with your criticism.)
Story
Intro
Prologue 
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3


Till we meet again everyone!
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To put it simply, my old title card artist and I are no longer associating with each other. So I'm looking for a new title card artist to help with my LP title cards. If ya know someone who can do this or want to offer, please let me know. I'm willing to pay for said cards, but it all depends on the price and such. So please leave a comment on this if you can and let me know of anyone you'd recommend or if you want to offer.

Till next time, i'm Keeneye47/Wolfkeen

Till we meet again...
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So a close friend of mines, :iconmangajag: is looking to drum up commissions to help compensate for a bit of a bad situation he finds himself in. He's only got about 30$ left for the rest of the month and as ya no doubt can guess, that's not a lot. He's looking to do commissions, so check the link for his prices. If you can't commission, at least spread either the journal or the tumblr link around. Any kind of support/help is greatly appreciated!

managajag.tumblr.com/post/1526…

With that said, I'm Keeneye47/Wolfkeen!

Till we meet again...

Edit: Welp, let it be known that I messed up. Just to clear things up with everyone, :iconmangajag: is looking to earn money by doing commissions. He's doing this to try and get out of a troubling situation. Sorry for not making this clear! I'm an idiot, I know.
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Saw everyone else doing it, so f**k it! My turn! (I'm gonna do another for my FoE character later)

Character: Keeneye


1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel. 
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong. (Considering his line of work, he needs to be)
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. 
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color. 
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red. 
8. [ ] Their eyes change color
9. [ ] They have wings.
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. 
20.[ ] They are a healer. 
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (wouldn't say lost, but he's adopted)
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[X] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (He's not afraid to state his morals) 
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder. 
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane. 
39.[ ] They are a psycho. 
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities. 
41.[X] They are very intelligent. (Once again, considering his line of work)
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. 
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows.
50.[X] They have a rare/unusual name. (Keeneye would be seen as a weird name to most)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'. 
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. (Depends on the situation, but it happens)
68.[X] They are very patient. (Yep, considering)
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[X] They have amnesia. (Very much so, since he has zero knowledge about himself since he was young)
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 
73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'. 
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements- 

8 Points

1. [ ] They smoke. 
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 
3. [X] They are overweight. (He's stockier then normal)
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others. 
7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. 
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

-1 points

Total 7 points

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW. 

Not bad, a 7 puts me just over being considered an anti sue. So I guess I'm balanced enough :)!
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